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Friday 21 August 2015

The Dump! -Written by Toma (Me) and Nisha!

Kia ora my blog buddies! Relating to The Viewer, Nisha (classmate) and I have been working on a poem called "The Dump!" Of course the whole class has been doing the same thing. Here is the new revolution of poem!
The Dump:
Robotic Technology
Yucky Black Smoke wondering in the air
Webs Extend as the spider takes over
Huge piles of unused items
Abandoned child roams around the Junkyard
A mouldy T.V 

The pollutions spreads around the environment.
And thats....
The Dump!
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  1. Anonymous15 October 2015 at 10:25

    Hi Toma,

    I really like your poem about the dump it is very interesting and you have used a lot of interesting vocabulary.What made you want to describe the poem the way you did?Maybe next time you can make the text another colour so that it will be more clearer.

    From: Lorna
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