Hi Blog World! This is my Remember When Poem including a collage! This is about the Camp we went to at Long Bay (MERC). Hope you enjoy!
That Was Camp.
Remember when we hopped on the bus and had a great party on the way to camp and how all of us joined in as we sung songs?
Remember the time when we first arrived at camp and we heard the splish sploshing sounds of the rain drops?
That was camp.
Remember how we set up our beds and felt like this day will be remembered forever?
Remember the time when we did our first activity and realised that there is going to be way more ahead of us?
That was Camp.
Remember that night at camp when we first took a look at our dinner for the night and licked our lips as our tummies rumbled monstrously?
Do you remember when Orlando audaciously took on the great waves when we went out for surfing?
That was CAMP!
Kia ora Toma,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed your remember poem.You painted a picture and really showed the audience what it was like at camp.You have used descriptive language and followed the instructions.instructions. Ka pai Toma! Keep up the great work Toma.
From:Toto
Selamat Pagi Toma,
ReplyDeleteThanks for commenting on my blog. I really hoped that my collage hooked you in because that is the first thing that is seen.
When we went there, on the top deck was like a party with everyone's favourite songs! We were quite loud because Taulua was trying to catch up on sleep. What was your favourite song to sing on the bus? You can visit my blog by clicking on my name!
Thanks again!