My Quality Blog Comment On A Classmate's Remember When Poem!

Hi blog world! My last post was about my Remember When Poem and a collage. But now, I have made a Qualiy Blog Comment on my classmate Evanjaline's blog post with her Poem and Collage.
Do you really think this is a Quality Comment?

Remember When.... Poem (With Collage!) Camp 2015

Hi Blog World! This is my Remember When Poem including a collage! This is about the Camp we went to at Long Bay (MERC). Hope you enjoy!

That Was Camp.

Remember when we hopped on the bus and had a great party on the way to camp and how all of us joined in as we sung songs?

Remember the time when we first arrived at camp and we heard the splish sploshing sounds of the rain drops?

That was camp.

Remember how we set up our beds and felt like this day will be remembered forever?

Remember the time when we did our first activity and realised that there is going to be way more ahead of us?

That was Camp.

Remember that night at camp when we first took a look at our dinner for the night and licked our lips as our tummies rumbled monstrously?

Do you remember when Orlando audaciously took on the great waves when we went out for surfing?

That was CAMP!