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Showing posts with label Poem. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Poem. Show all posts

Friday, 21 August 2015

The Dump! -Written by Toma (Me) and Nisha!

Kia ora my blog buddies! Relating to The Viewer, Nisha (classmate) and I have been working on a poem called "The Dump!" Of course the whole class has been doing the same thing. Here is the new revolution of poem!
The Dump:
Robotic Technology
Yucky Black Smoke wondering in the air
Webs Extend as the spider takes over
Huge piles of unused items
Abandoned child roams around the Junkyard
A mouldy T.V 

The pollutions spreads around the environment.
And thats....
The Dump!

Thursday, 13 August 2015

My Quality Blog Comment On A Classmate's Remember When Poem!

Hi blog world! My last post was about my Remember When Poem and a collage. But now, I have made a Qualiy Blog Comment on my classmate Evanjaline's blog post with her Poem and Collage.
Do you really think this is a Quality Comment?

Remember When.... Poem (With Collage!) Camp 2015

Hi Blog World! This is my Remember When Poem including a collage! This is about the Camp we went to at Long Bay (MERC). Hope you enjoy!

That Was Camp.

Remember when we hopped on the bus and had a great party on the way to camp and how all of us joined in as we sung songs?
Remember the time when we first arrived at camp and we heard the splish sploshing sounds of the rain drops?
That was camp.

Remember how we set up our beds and felt like this day will be remembered forever?
Remember the time when we did our first activity and realised that there is going to be way more ahead of us?
That was Camp.

Remember that night at camp when we first took a look at our dinner for the night and licked our lips as our tummies rumbled monstrously?
Do you remember when Orlando audaciously took on the great waves when we went out for surfing?

That was CAMP!


Wednesday, 27 August 2014

Descriptive Free Verse Poem

Here is 3 wonderful poems that I have created that describes the pictures above it. The "Creepie Show" Image inspired me to write about dark and misty things and the "Wave" picture put a poem in my head about how it splashes at the shore and what it kind of looks like. Last of all the "Mother and it's kitten